Do you have a kind of red warning flag that indicates too much stress?

2020-08-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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When I am under much stress, I lose my eager to eat something. In that time foods don\'t taste delicious and I don\'t have power to make meals for myself. Few months ago I felt much stress so I had only one meal per a day and lost some kilograms in a week. At that time I experienced my health got worse in a very short time. So I\'m trying not to skip meals as much as possible.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]. Thank you for sharing this experience of yours. It must have been hard at that time but good for you for overcoming it. 
It seems you are in a much better place now. I appreciate your efforts once again and I look forward to the next one. 
Have a wonderful Tuesday. ~Teacher Jane c\",)


When I am under much stress, I lose my eager to eat something.
>>> When I am under much stress, I lose my appetite to eat something.

In that time foods don\'t taste delicious and I don\'t have power to make meals for myself.
>>> In those times, foods do not taste delicious and I do not have the energy to make meals for myself.

Few months ago I felt much stress so I had only one meal per a day and lost some kilograms in a week.
>>> A few months ago, I felt much stress so I had only one meal per day and I lost some kilograms/ weight in a week.

At that time I experienced my health got worse in a very short time.
>>> At that time, I experienced/ realized my health deteriorated in a very short time.

So I\'m trying not to skip meals as much as possible.
>>> So I am trying not to skip meals as much as possible.

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