Do you have a piggy bank?
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I don\'t have my own piggy bank. The first reason why I don\'t have one is because I won’t be able to touch money until it is full of them. Besides, I can’t even use the money when I really need. Secondly, I won’t be able to know how much I’ve been saving money. In my opinion, the best way to save money is to put them in my secret place in the envelope so I can take them out and count them how much I’ve saved anytime. In fact, I have been doing like that.
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>> I don\'t have my own piggy bank. The first reason why I don\'t have
one is because I won’t be able touch my money until the piggy bank is full of money.
Besides, I can’t even use the money when I really need it. Secondly, I
won’t be able to know how much money I’ve been saving. In my opinion,
the best way to save money is to put them in a secret place like inside an
envelope so I can take them out anytime and count how much I’ve saved. In fact, I have been doing like that.
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