Do you have a religion? Tell me something about your religion.
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In that case, would you choose another religion? That is something we should talk about on our next class, or might as well compose about it. Thank you for sharing this piece with me! Wonderful thoughts!
~Teacher Eunice
I was bone with a christian.
>>> I was born a Christian.
That means my mother and father have been a christian.
>>> That means my mother and father have been Christians for a long time.
I didn\'t have any chance to choose my religion, because my parents brought me to the church when I was a baby.
>>> I didn\'t have any chances to choose my religion, because my parents brought me to church regularly when I was a baby.
I have attended the church since I was bone. But I don\'t have any knowledge about the bible, because I haven\'t put my effort to learn a bible.
>>> I have attended church since I was born, but I don\'t have any knowledge about the bible because I haven\'t put my effort to learn the bible.
I feel a little bit shameful every time I realize my attitude against the church.
>>> I feel a little bit shameful every time I realize my attitude is against the church.
I have never denied that I am a christian.
>>> I have never denied that I was a Christian.
I know some people who don\'t want to say they are christian.
>>> I know some people who don\'t want to say they are Christians.
>>> OR: I know some people who don\'t claim themselves as Christians.
Our people believe that christian must be kind, gentle, keep the regulation very and shouldn\'t permit the crime.
>>> Our people believe that Christians must be kind, gentle, must follow the regulation and shouldn\'t commit or permit crime.
If people attending the church are involved in the crime, they will get blamed by citizen in Korea.
>>> If people who attend church are involved in the crime, they will get blamed by citizens in Korea.
I have same opinion when christian commit a crime.
>>> I have same opinions if Christians commit a crime.
I was wondering how people in the country which was declared the state religion act, so I have asked it to my colleague came from England.
>>> I was wondering how people in the country got affected by the state religion act, so I had to ask my colleague who came from England.
she said that they are also a human and they just attend the church.
>>> She said that they are also humans, and they just attend church.
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