Do you have a shopping day like Black Friday in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course, it is differ each of shop.
I think shopping is not get stress but buying something for one\'s relieve stress.
So I don\'t like that crowded a lot of customers in a shop.
Often there is a \' guerrilla sale\' on a website.
But when I access on the website, goods was sold out.
Not for funny shopping but filled with stress.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. You\'re right, shopping should be fun.
- T, Beth
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Of course, it is differ each of shop.>>> Of course, it differs for each shop.
I think shopping is not get stress but buying something for one\'s relieve stress.
>>> I think shopping should not be stressful but buying something for one to relieve stress.
So I don\'t like that crowded a lot of customers in a shop.
>>> So I don\'t like shops crowded with customers.
Often there is a \' guerrilla sale\' on a website.
>>> There is often a guerrilla sale in a website.
But when I access on the website, goods was sold out.
>>> But when I access on the website, the goods were always sold out.
Not for funny shopping but filled with stress.
>>> It\'s not for fun shopping but filled with stress.
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