Do you have a sleeping disorder?
학생이 쓴 원문
Fortunately I have never had a sleeping disorder.
My dairy life is relatively regular including sleeping time.
My life schedule is predictable. I do my work with concentrate in the daytime.
Recently I have been exercising for about 30 minutes.
Taking a shower after exercise make me refresh.
I can sleep very well everyday.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Than you again for your ideas!
Have a nice day!
Teacher ELLY.
Do you have a sleeping disorder?
Fortunately, I have never had a sleeping disorder.
CORRECT!
CORRECT!
or>>Fortunately, I have never experienced any sleeping disorders before.
My dairy life is relatively regular including sleeping time.
>>My dairy life is relatively regular including my sleeping hours.
>>My dairy life is relatively regular including my sleeping hours.
My life schedule is predictable.
>>My daily schedule is predictable.
or>>My life is very predictable.
I do my work with concentrate in the daytime.
>>I always concentrate when doing my work in the daytime.
>>I always concentrate when doing my work in the daytime.
Recently I have been exercising for about 30 minutes.
CORRECT!
or>>Recently, I have started exercising for 30 minutes.
Taking a shower after exercise make me refresh.
>>Taking a shower after exercising always refreshes me.
Taking a shower after exercise make me refresh.
>>Taking a shower after exercising always refreshes me.
I can sleep very well everyday.
CORRECT!
or>>I sleep well on a daily basis.
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