Do you have a sweet tooth? Why or why not?
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I don\'t think I like it very much...Because as I get older, I crave more savory food than sweetness, and it tastes good and tastes so artificial that I get tired of it quickly.And if I eat something, I feel like I\'m taking poison.
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Do you have a sweet tooth? Why or why not?
I don\'t think I like it very much...Because as I get older, I crave more savory food than sweetness,
>>> I don\'t like sweets very much because as I get older, I crave more for savory foods that sweets.
and it tastes good and tastes so artificial that I get tired of it quickly.
>>> Also, it taste good at the beginning then it taste artificial so I get tired of it quickly.
And if I eat something, I feel like I\'m taking poison.
>>> Lastly, whenever I eat something sweet, I feel like I\'m taking in poison.
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