Do you have a vision of a better society? What changes would you make?

Hi there Sir [이름]!

I also want to live in that ideal society.

I think it will be really nice to be with the people you love in that place.

In regards to the weapons that humans make, they should also think about the long term bad effects of it.

We can talk about this in class.

Teacher Nina

I dream of a society that doesn’t have greed, crimes, or conflicts.

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I want a society to be safe and full with love and respect.

>> I want a society that is safe and full with love and respect.

The society should be the place where we live together, not myself.

>> Did you mean: The society should be the place where we live, not only by myself.

People are friendly, cheerful and smiling all the time.

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It is an ideal society that cannot exist in the real world.

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Although there is a possibility that living things could exist in other planets, Earth is the only known planet so far that a human being is living.

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However, people don’t seem to be aware of the seriousness that the biggest threat to human society is ourselves.

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We are destroying Earth and killing each other.

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There are more than 170 countries and a thousand different ethnic groups that show antagonization toward the others.

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We have been developing deadly weapons such as nuclear bombs that can exterminate all the human beings.

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We build houses and factories in the name of improving people’s well-being.

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However, such developments could be detrimental to human\'s existence in the end.

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