Do you have any collections? Tell me about it,
학생이 쓴 원문
I don’t have any collection now.
But when I was young, I enjoyed collecting a earring.
I almost hadn’t been makeup at that time.
So, I had often heard just around me that why I don’t makeup and they told to me you looked pale.
I didn’t want to heard it.
But I also didn’t feel like make-up.
Make-up made me awkward.
One day, one of my friends told to me if you don’t want to make-up, try to put on earrring.
It fitted me. Since then I had been collecting earrring. However, it was all stopped when I got married and have a baby.
It is too bad to me.
강사 첨삭
Good evening Ms. [이름] [이름]! Colleting something that we really want gives us satisfaction but there are times that we have to sacrifice because of more important things.
Aki~
I don’t have any collection now.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >>> I don\'t collect anything now,
But when I was young, I enjoyed collecting a earring.
>>> But when I was young, I enjoyed collecting earrings.
I almost hadn’t been makeup at that time.
I almost hadn’t been makeup at that time.
>>> I almost had not been on make up at that time.
So, I had often heard just around me that why I don’t makeup and they told to me you looked pale.
So, I had often heard just around me that why I don’t makeup and they told to me you looked pale.
>>> So, I often heard people around me saying that I looked pale when I don\'t have any make up.
>>> So, I often heard people around me saying that I looked pale when I don\'t wear any make up.
I didn’t want to heard it.
I didn’t want to heard it.
>>> I didn;t want t hear it.
But I also didn’t feel like make-up.
But I also didn’t feel like make-up.
>>> But I also didn\'t like wearing make up
Make-up made me awkward.
Make-up made me awkward.
>>> wearing make up makes me feel awkward.
One day, one of my friends told to me if you don’t want to make-up, try to put on earrring.
One day, one of my friends told to me if you don’t want to make-up, try to put on earrring.
>>> One day, one of my friends told to me that if I don’t want to put on a make-up, try at least to put on earrings.
It fitted me. Since then I had been collecting earrring. However, it was all stopped when I got married and have a baby.
>>> It fitted me, Since then I had been collecting earrings. However, it all stopped when I got married and had a baby.
It fitted me. Since then I had been collecting earrring. However, it was all stopped when I got married and have a baby.
>>> It fitted me, Since then I had been collecting earrings. However, it all stopped when I got married and had a baby.
It is too bad to me.
>>> I feel bad about it.
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