Do you have any crime prevention tips?

2020-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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- I think that do not walking alone specialty at late night time. It would be better travel in group. If i have to go alone, stay in well lit and take the populated pathways. avoid shortcut. - Just in case, take a whistle with you. it will be helpful in emergency situation. - Prepare your schedule daily with safety in mind.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mari!

I appreciate you for submitting your homework.

I really agree with the tips that you mentioned especially for ladies. ^^

~Teacher Gina

- I think that do not walking alone specialty at late night time.

>> I think that you not walk alone especially late at night.
It would be better travel in group.

>> It would be better to travel in group.

If i have to go alone, stay in well lit and take the populated pathways. avoid shortcut.

>> If I have to go alone, I should stay in a well lit and populated pathways- avoid shortcuts.
- Just in case, take a whistle with you. It will be helpful in emergency situation.

>> CORRECT.
- Prepare your schedule daily with safety in mind.

>> CORRECT.

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