Do you have any customs or traditions in Korea that you want to change? Why? If none, why so?
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I think some traditions aren\'t proper to people who are living now.
For example, some still believe a home remedy. they are not believe a modern medical technology.
We should believe a medical sciences, because those have many scientific evidences.
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I think some traditions aren\'t proper to people who are living now.
>> I think some traditions are not appropriate for our generation now.
For example, some still believe a home remedy. they are not believe a modern medical technology.
>> For example, some still believe in home remedies and not in modern medical technology.
We should believe a medical sciences, because those have many scientific evidences.
>> I believe that we should believe in medical science these days because it has many scientific pieces of evidence compared to the past.
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