Do you have any exciting stories to tell from the past week?(ANSWER)

2018-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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My favorite drama was over last week. Its title is 'A Hundred Day's Worth' The reason why I watched the drama is because of my favorite actor. That drama was a 16-part drama, and I was disappointed because that drama was very short. I hope the drama was longer. Especially, I almost cried because I was so sad at the last episode. Anyway I lost a TV program to watch on Monday and Tuesday night... :( Thank you for reading! By. [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

Do you have any exciting stories to tell from the past week? Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

My favorite drama was over last week.
Its title is \'A Hundred Day\'s Worth\'
The reason why I watched the drama is because of my favorite actor.
That drama was a 16-part drama, and I was disappointed because that drama was very short.
I hope the drama was longer.
Especially, I almost cried because I was so sad at the last episode.
Anyway I lost a TV program to watch on Monday and Tuesday night..
:(

 

CORRECTIONS:

My favorite drama was over last week.
Its title is \'A Hundred
Days’ Worth\'
The reason why I watched the drama is because of my favorite actor.
That drama was a 16-part drama, and I was disappointed because that drama was very short.
I hope the drama was longer.
Especially, I almost cried because I was so sad at the last episode.
Anyway
, I lost a TV program to watch every Monday and Tuesday night..
:(

 

 

 ** Dear [이름], well done. J You just committed a very few corrections. Please take note of them. J Thank you. ^^

 

Speak with you tomorrow. J

 

   ---------T. Alexia----------

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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