Do you have any exciting stories to tell from the past week?(ANSWER)
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HOMEWORK:
Do you have any exciting stories to tell from the past week? Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
My favorite drama was over last week.
Its title is \'A Hundred Day\'s Worth\'
The reason why I watched the drama is because of my favorite actor.
That drama was a 16-part drama, and I was disappointed because that drama was
very short.
I hope the drama was longer.
Especially, I almost cried because I was so sad at the last episode.
Anyway I lost a TV program to watch on Monday and Tuesday night..
:(
CORRECTIONS:
My favorite drama was over last
week.
Its title is \'A Hundred Days’ Worth\'
The reason why I watched the drama is because of my favorite actor.
That drama was a 16-part drama, and I was disappointed because that drama
was very short.
I hope the drama was longer.
Especially, I almost cried because I was so sad at the last episode.
Anyway, I lost a TV
program to watch every Monday and Tuesday night..
:(
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