Do you have any exciting stories to tell from the past week? Please answer in complete sentences.
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HOMEWORK:
Do you have any exciting stories to tell from the past week? Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
1 week ago I have exciting story. It\'s about play with my friend. In Saturday I play with friend in my house. we play game and then go to seven eleven and buy some snack and came back. It\'s fanny day cause I play with my friend
CORRECTIONS:
One week ago, I have an exciting story. It\'s about playing with my friend. On Saturday, I played with my friend in my house. We played a game and then went to Seven Eleven to buy some snack and came back. It\'s a fun day because I played with my friend.
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