Do you have any good techniques for organizing your time?
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Sure I have it. It\'s a plan as order ahead of doing something like cleaning a room. When I clean my room, first open the window, dust from the top, use the floor, and water. It may look easy, you would do it wrong in a hurry. But, it could save a time by doing that. And anther one is that you should be more industrious. :)
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Exciting Thursday to you, Elic! You are smarter than you think; stronger than you can ever imagine, all you need is to go for that dream. Start today and you will reach the destination.
Sure I have it.
>>> Sure, I have some techniques for organizing my time.
It\'s a plan as order ahead of doing something like cleaning a room.
>>> I usually plan ahead of time before doing something, just like cleaning my room.
When I clean my room, first open the window, dust from the top, use the floor, and water.
>>> When I clean my room, first I open the window and dust everything from the top and I mop the floor.
It may look easy, you would do it wrong in a hurry.
>>> It may look easy but you might do it wrong when you\'re in a hurry.
But, it could save a time by doing that.
>>> But, cleaning fast could also save a lot of time.
And anther one is that you should be more industrious.
>>> And the other technique is being industrious.
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