Do you have any new year's resolution?
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I would like to push myself to new circumstances. It means that ,as i said before, I am about to go to Austrailia to take park in Working Holiday Program and it will make me vurnerable and exposed to a new situation and finally feel my limitation. Through these various experiences, I will become aware of myself and grow up more not only physically but also mentally. That is, I would have enough time for self-reflection as a important expression we studied yesterday. I hope it would be processed well without tremendous problems. However, It is undenialbe fact that many great and small problems follows a traveler wherever he goes. I also do not want to deny it. In this exciting time before leaving, all I am able to do is only preparance i think. I have no choice but to do strict prior-investigation. This will make me sure about my great gourney. I believe i'll do it well as i always have been. At lastm, there is a word well-matched with my situation. Enjoy it it you can't avoid. Thank yo
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Hello there!!
A Happy FRIDAY morning to you!
Thanks for sending this composition and kindly check the corrections I made for you. :)
You know what, there\'s nothing certain in this world. No matter how much we plan and how much we want things to be perfect, we\'ll always
find imperfections along the way. If you live what you\'ve written on the last part which is, just enjoy it if you can\'t avoid it, then things would
be less complicated and you\'ll find peace in you. :)
Good luck to your next journey in life!
I am wishing you great things! I know you\'ll make it! Just believe in yourself! ^^
Anyway, have a great weekend ahead of you!
See you in class!
T.Alice
I would like to push myself to new circumstances.
>>CORRECT!!
It means that ,as i said before, I am about to go to Austrailia to take park in Working Holiday Program and it will make me vurnerable and exposed to a new situation and finally feel my limitation.
>>As I\'ve said before, I am about to go to Australia to take part in a Working Holiday Program and it will make me vulnerable and exposed to a new situation and eventually feel my limitation.
Through these various experiences, I will become aware of myself and grow up more not only physically but also mentally.
>>CORRECT!!
That is, I would have enough time for self-reflection as a important expression we studied yesterday.
>>That is, I would have enough time for self-reflection as an important expression as we have studied yesterday.
I hope it would be processed well without tremendous problems.
>>I hope things would go well without tremendous problems.
However, It is undenialbe fact that many great and small problems follows a traveler wherever he goes.
>>However, it is an undeniable fact that many great or small problems follow a traveler wherever he goes.
I also do not want to deny it.
>>CORRECT!!
In this exciting time before leaving, all I am able to do is only preparance i think.
>>At this exciting point of time before leaving, all I am able to do is prepare I think.
I have no choice but to do strict prior-investigation.
>>I have no choice but to do a survey/preview.
This will make me sure about my great gourney.
>>This will make me sure of having a great journey.
I believe i\'ll do it well as i always have been.
>>I believe I\'ll do it well as I always do.
At lastm, there is a word well-matched with my situation.
>>At last there is a word well-matched with my situation.
Enjoy it it you can\'t avoid. Thank yo
>>Just enjoy it if you can\'t avoid it. Thank You!
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