Do you have any plans for Luna New Year(Seollal)?(ANSWER)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
HOMEWORK:
Do you have any plans for Lunar New Year (Seollal)?
Please answer in a complete sentence.
YOUR ANSWER:
1.
2/4.
2019
-Go to grandfater\'s house.
-Meet my cousins.
-Make some foods.
-Play with my cousins.
-Play all day.
2. 2/5. 2019
-Eat some foods that we made.
-Say \"Happy New Year!\" to my grandfather.
-Greet other cousins and other parents.
- Go to grandparent\'s house.
3. 2/6. 2019
-Go to Sauna with my grandparenrts.
-Eat lunch, dinner together.
-Come back home!
It\' my plan.
CORRECTIONS:
1. 2.4.2019
-Go to grandfather’s
house.
-Meet my cousins.
-Make some foods.
-Play with my cousins.
-Play all day.
2. 2.5.2019
-Eat some foods that we made.
-Say \"Happy New Year!\" to my grandfather.
-Greet other cousins and other parents.
- Go to grandparents’
house.
3. 2.6.2019
-Go to sauna with my grandparents.
-Eat lunch, dinner together.
-Go back home!
It\'s my plan.
** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
---------T. Alexia----------
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