Do you have any tips for making air travel more enjoyable?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I have.
When I have a travel with my family, I usually get my daughter to make a plan for the trip.
If so, there are several advantages.
First, the travel members are more interested in the travel than when I plan it alone.
Second, they actively attend to the travel schedule.
Third, they suggest their idea for the travel schedule.
So it makes the travel more complete.
Fourth, I can save time for travel planning.
When my son is a little older, I will have my children plan our family trip together.
It\'s my special tip for complete trip.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Jennifer!
Thank you for sharing your tips :)
Yes, I have.
>>> CORRECT!
When I have a travel with my family, I usually get my daughter to make a plan for the trip.
>>> When I travel with my family, I usually let my daughter make travel plans.
If so, there are several advantages.
>>> CORRECT!
First, the travel members are more interested in the travel than when I plan it alone.
>>> First, travelers show more interest than when they plan alone.
Second, they actively attend to the travel schedule.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: Second, they actively attend the itinerary.
Third, they suggest their idea for the travel schedule.
>>> Third, they suggest their ideas for the travel schedule.
OR: Third, they suggest their idea for the travel schedule.
So it makes the travel more complete.
>>> CORRECT!
Fourth, I can save time for travel planning.
>>> Fourth, you can save time planning your trip.
When my son is a little older, I will have my children plan our family trip together.
>>> When my son is a little older, I will have my children plan a family trip together.
It\'s my special tip for complete trip.
>>> This is my special tip for a perfect trip.
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