Do you have any vice?
학생이 쓴 원문
Since I could remember, I didn\'t have any vices such as involving crim accidents or drug or sexual issues.
I am not good at putting me down completely, that is why I couldn\'t enjoy drinking with people even my driends and family.
However, I have several bad habits. One of those is driving speedy. While I am driving, I become a little tough person. Onother thing is I don\'t organize necessities neat and tidy. I prefer doing moderately.
Therefore, I made distiction the drawers for different uses but inside was not clean.
I don\'t know if I have a rwpulsive habit or not.
Maybe my family can tell something about me more than me.
강사 첨삭
Hello Young Won! Happy new week!
It is very reaffirming to know that living a clean live from a person like you who always does many things can be possible. It is a life worth emulating.
Vice can be known to self destruct us since it is abad habit such as drinking, smoking, gambling, doing drugs, among others.
Well, living simply and vice-free is a very good life style.
See you in class.
-T. Donna =)
>> Since I could remember, I didn\'t have any vice/s such as getting involved in crime accidents or drug or sexual issues.
I am not good at putting me down completely, that is why I couldn\'t enjoy drinking with people even my driends and family.
>> Correct!
Or: friends (SPELLING)
However, I have several bad habits. One of those is driving speedy. While I am driving, I become a little tough person.
However, I have several bad habits. One of those is driving speedy. While I am driving, I become a little tough person.
>> However, I have several bad habits. One of those is driving speedily. While I am driving, I become a little tough person.
Onother thing is I don\'t organize necessities neat and tidy. I prefer doing moderately.
>> Another thing is not organizing things neatly and tidily. I prefer doing it moderately.
Therefore, I made distiction the drawers for different uses but inside was not clean.
>> Therefore, I made distinctions with the drawers for different uses but inside, it\'s not clean.
I don\'t know if I have a rwpulsive habit or not.
>> Correct!
Or: repulsive (SPELLING)
Maybe my family can tell something about me more than me.
>> Maybe my family can tell something about me more than I can.
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