Do you have different feelings about shopping for clothes, shoes, electronic gadgets and food?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like shopping for food the most.
Having delicious meals and eating sweet and cute desserts with my family and close friends is one of the happiest things in my life and I think I need to earn money to have these happy moments ever after.
In the past, I spent much money on shopping for clothes, shoes and bags.
But these days I think it\'s somewhat meaningless to spend much money for improving my appearance so I am trying to reduce shopping for those kinds of things.
And actually I have few interests in electronic gadgets so I rarely spend money on those things.
강사 첨삭
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Do you have different feelings about shopping for clothes, shoes, electronic gadgets and food?
I like shopping for food the most.
>>> CORRECT =)
Having delicious meals and eating sweet and cute desserts with my family and close friends is one of the happiest things in my life and I think I need to earn money to have these happy moments ever after.
>>> CORRECT =)
In the past, I spent much money on shopping for clothes, shoes and bags.
>>> In the past, I spent much money on shopping for clothes, shoes, and bags.
But these days I think it\'s somewhat meaningless to spend much money for improving my appearance so I am trying to reduce shopping for those kinds of things.
>>> But these days I think it is somewhat meaningless to spend much money on improving my appearance so I am trying to reduce shopping for those kinds of things.
OR >>> But these days I think it is somewhat meaningless to spend much money on improving my appearance so I am trying to reduce shopping for those reasons.
And actually I have few interests in electronic gadgets so I rarely spend money on those things.
>>> CORRECT =)
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