Do you have enough time to do the things you want to do?
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Hi there Mr. [이름]!(\",)
When we were young, we had plenty of time to do the things we wanted to do but we didn\'t have enough money. Perhaps, we didn\'t have enough courage to do it too. But now that we are older, we might have the money but we don\'t have enough time. What to do?
~T. Lynn
No, I don\'t have enough time to do the things I want to do.
>> correct!
Actually, I have too many things to do.
>> correct!
1. I would like to travel many places, Euroup, Ameria, Canada, Autralia and Africa. I want to see the culture and beautiful scenery of each country.
>> First, I would like to travel many places. I\'d like to visit Europe, Ameria, Canada, Autralia and Africa. I want to see the culture and beautiful sceneries of each country.
2. I want to learn many sports.
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When I was young, I enjoyed few sports. but, Now, I want to do every sports, Tennis, baseball, Skii, Wall climbing.
>> When I was young, I enjoyed few sports. but now, I want to do every sports like Tennis, Baseball, Skiing, and Wall climbing..
3. I want to spend many times with my family.
>> I want to spend a lot of time with my family.
I would like to play with my children.
>> correct!
4. I want to take a rest and s[이름]p for a long time.
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Sometimes, I feel tired. so, I would like to take a rest.
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Like above, I would like to do a lot of thing. but, I don\'t have enough time and money..
>> Like I mentioned above, I would like to do a lot of things but I don\'t have enough time and money.
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