Do you have the same taste in movies and TV shows as most of your friends?
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Nowadays, there are not many chances to go to the movie theatre with friends. But, I used to watch them with friends about once a month when I was in my 20s.
I tended to follow the others’ opinions about what we were going to watch, because our taste was well fitted. This was why all of us were boys studying science or engineering. Science fiction, action and fantasy films were our favourite. Whatever was good, but nobody didn’t dare to go and watch a romantic movie with us.
Most of us prefered to play a game than to watch TV, so the broadcasting of E-sports was the best TV show for us. However, one day, one of them introduced me to an American drama and I watched the whole 20 episodes within two days. For a while, I was falling love watching this. I felt like that was the other genre of blockbusters which I liked. We shared a lot about them with him including some illegal copies. In excuse, it was hard to find them in Korea through official routh, at that time.
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Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!
Yeah pirated copies are common before.
But with the streaming, YouTube, Netflix and others I think only a few buy pirated copies.
Anyhow thank you^^
Nowadays, there are not many chances to go to the movie theatre with friends.
>>>CORRECT!
But, I used to watch them with friends about once a month when I was in my 20s.
>>>CORRECT!
I tended to follow the others’ opinions about what we were going to watch, because our taste was well fitted.
>>>I tended to follow other\'s opinions about what we were going to watch because our taste was well fitted.
This was why all of us were boys studying science or engineering.
>>>We were all boys and studying science or engineering.
Science fiction, action and fantasy films were our favourite.
>>>Science fiction, action, and fantasy movies were our favorite movies.
Whatever was good, but nobody didn’t dare to go and watch a romantic movie with us.
>>>Whatever was good, but nobody dare to go and watch a romantic movie with us.
Most of us prefered to play a game than to watch TV, so the broadcasting of E-sports was the best TV show for us.
>>>Most of us preferred to play a game than to watch TV, so the broadcasting of E-sports was the best TV show for us.
However, one day, one of them introduced me to an American drama and I watched the whole 20 episodes within two days.
>>>But one day, one of them introduced me to an American drama and I watched all 20 episodes in two days.
For a while, I was falling love watching this.
>>>For a while, I fell in love watching this.
I felt like that was the other genre of blockbusters which I liked.
>>>CORRECT!
We shared a lot about them with him including some illegal copies.
>>>CORRECT!
In excuse, it was hard to find them in Korea through official routh, at that time.
>>>In excuse, it was difficult to find them in Korea through official routes at that time.
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