Do you imagine that being a billionaire would be stressful? Why? Why not?
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I imagine that being a billionaire would be stressful, because I think they can\'t have a normal life/simple life like us, although they have a lot of money.
On the other hand, I think that being a billionaire can make them happy somtimes, expecially when they travel the world , buy or learn sth when they want, regardless of the money.
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Do you imagine that being a billionaire would be stressful? Why? Why not?
I imagine that being a billionaire would be stressful, because I think they can\'t have a normal life/simple life like us, although they have a lot of money.
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OR: I imagine that being a billionaire would be stressful, because I think they can\'t have a normal life or simple life like us, although they have a lot of money.
On the other hand, I think that being a billionaire can make them happy somtimes, expecially when they travel the world , buy or learn sth when they want, regardless of the money.
>>On the other hand, I think being a billionaire can sometimes make them happy. Especially when they travel around the world, they can buy or learn anything when they want, regardless of money.
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