Do you interrupt your study activities or do all the homework at one sitting?
학생이 쓴 원문
I generally do my homework or study in one sitting. When I was a high school student, I studied for 13 hours a day. Not all Korean high schools make students study until night. However, my high school has a dormitory so we should follow strict schedules until night. This strict schedule was based on the study. I sometimes despaired because my high school has an excessive competitive structure. However, I had learned diligence and patience over three years. Since I graduated high school, I have tried to do my best even if it is a very trivial thing. Trying to do my best became my habit. In conclusion, I do my study or homework with concentration and passion in one sitting.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Helena!
Thank you for doing your homework. Just take note of the minor corrections. You did great. Keep it up!
-T. Caitlyn
I generally do my homework or study in one sitting.>>CORRECT
When I was a high school student, I studied for 13 hours a day.
>>CORRECT
Not all Korean high schools make students study until night.
>>CORRECT
However, my high school has a dormitory so we should follow strict schedules until night.
>>CORRECT
This strict schedule was based on the study.
>> We follow a strict study schedule.
I sometimes despaired because my high school has an excessive competitive structure.
>>CORRECT
However, I had learned diligence and patience over three years.
>>CORRECT
Since I graduated high school, I have tried to do my best even if it is a very trivial thing.
>>Since I graduated from high school, I have tried to do my best even if it is a very trivial thing.
Trying to do my best became my habit.
>>CORRECT
In conclusion, I do my study or homework with concentration and passion in one sitting.
>>CORRECT
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.