Do you keep a journal or diary?
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Q. Do you keep a journal or diary? Answer in FIVE (5) sentences.
A. I don\'t keep a diary.
I tried to keep a diary but It is difficult to do everyday.
Instead of diary, I do keep my emotion diary in memo.
But also this is not everyday.. haha
I respect the person that keep a diary everyday!!
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Good day, Angela! I appreciate your time and effort in making your composition. Thank you also for being honest and for sharing your ideas about the given topic. Keep up the good. I hope to see you next time. Have a great day! ~T. Lyn
I don\'t keep a diary.
>>Correct.
I tried to keep a diary but It is difficult to do everyday.
I tried to keep a diary but It is difficult to do everyday.
>>I have tried keeping a diary in the past but it was difficult to do every day.
Instead of diary, I do keep my emotion diary in memo.
Instead of diary, I do keep my emotion diary in memo.
>>Instead of a diary, I keep an emotional diary in my memo.
But also this is not everyday.. haha
But also this is not everyday.. haha
>>But I also don\'t do it every day.
I respect the person that keep a diary everyday!!
>>I respect people who write a diary every day.
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