Do you know about history of computer?
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I don\'t know a lot about the history of computer. I just know that the first computer was an abacus. Can you believe that people had thought of an abacus as a computer? After abacus, scientists made a digital computer named ENIAC and then computers have been developing and desktops and notebooks have been invented.
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I don\'t know a lot about the history of computer. I just know that the
first computer was an abacus. Can you believe that people had thought of
an abacus as a computer? After abacus, scientists made a digital
computer named ENIAC and then computers have been developing and
desktops and notebooks have been invented.
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