Do you know about my dream?
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] Write about the most beautiful dream that you had or someone had.
I had a dream about meeting Greta Thunberg.
-We play together and we eat together.
At my house!
We had a pajama party together.
We saw a movie together and we sing a song together.
Then we go to bed.-
I had a wonderful day when I had this dream!
It is very great dream for me!
강사 첨삭
Hi Clair!
Here\'s the composition you sent me. Catch you tomorrow!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Write about the most beautiful dream that you had or someone had.
I had a dream about meeting Greta Thunberg.
>> correct
-We play together and we eat together.
>> In my dream, we played and ate together.
>> or: In my dream, we played and had a meal together.
At my house!
>> correct
We had a pajama party together.
>> or: We had a pajama party at my place.
We saw a movie together and we sing a song together.
>> Also, we saw a movie and sang a song together.
Then we go to bed.-
>> Then we went to bed.
I had a wonderful day when I had this dream!
>> correct
It is very great dream for me!
>> correct
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