Do you know any single parents? How did they become single parents?
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Yes, I do...^^ I have some acquaintances and friends who are single parents. One is my best friend whose husband passed away 5 years ago because of his sudden heart attack. His death happened accidently and unexpectedly. Another is raising her daughter alone. Her husbad and my friend live separately. Her husnad left much debt to her. Whild he\'s doing a business, he borrowed my friend\'s name on his own business. In another case, wow....I can give you several examples more...but I will stop writing now. Cause ...you know....what good lives!....That\'s too sad...Life is like a perfect weather doen\'t exist for a long time.
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Hello!^^
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Cheers!
Jean
Yes, I do...^^ I have some acquaintances and friends who are single parents.
>> correct
One is my best friend whose husband passed away 5 years ago because of his sudden heart attack.
>> One is my best friends whose husband passed away 5 years ago because of a sudden heart attack is a single parent.
His death happened accidentally and unexpectedly.
>> correct
Another is raising her daughter alone.
>> or: Another friend is raising her daughter alone.
Her husbad and my friend live separately.
>> My friend and her husbands live separately.
Her husnad left much debt to her.
>> Her husband left her a huge debt.
Whild he\'s doing a business, he borrowed my friend\'s name on his own business.
>> He conducted his business under my friend\'s name.
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