Do you know anyone who is addicted to shopping? Are you addicted to shopping?
학생이 쓴 원문
People used to think shopaholics shop because they love clothes and fashion, but there is a lot more to it than that. The reasons for being a shopaholic go much deeper than a passion for style. This is true for many others who shop in excess. When they don’t have a lot going on in their lives, they tend to shop more. They take a trip to the mall. Shopping provides a sense of excitement which may be missing in a person’s life. Just the simple experience of being in a mall or store is exciting, as there are bright lights, colorful displays, uplifting music, and lots of treats for the sense. That sure beats the monotony of day to day life which we all sometimes experience. The other reason is that despite the proliferation of social media and the numerous methods available to connect with others, many of us suffer from loneliness and a lack of connection. When we shop, we are out among other people and often develop a rapport with sales associates and feel less lonely.
강사 첨삭
Shopping is great when we have a lot of money, right Sir [이름]? Hihihi. ^^
You are definitely right. When we plan to go shopping, we feel excited. We even sometimes make a list on the things that we are going to buy.
I hope to visit the places where it is good to shop in Korea someday.Thank you so much for your time.
See you in class.
Happy Monday. ^^
Teacher Nina
People used to think shopaholics shop because they love clothes and fashion, but there is a lot more to it than that. >> correct
The reasons for being a shopaholic go much deeper than a passion for style.
>> correct
This is true for many others who shop in excess.
>> correct
When they don’t have a lot going on in their lives, they tend to shop more.
>> correct
They take a trip to the mall.
>> correct
Shopping provides a sense of excitement which may be missing in a person’s life.
>> correct
Just the simple experience of being in a mall or store is exciting, as there are bright lights, colorful displays, uplifting music, and lots of treats for the sense.
>> correct
That sure beats the monotony of day to day life which we all sometimes experience.
>> correct
The other reason is that despite the proliferation of social media and the numerous methods available to connect with others, many of us suffer from loneliness and a lack of connection.
>> correct
When we shop, we are out among other people and often develop a rapport with sales associates and feel less lonely.
>> correct
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