Do you know how to overcome fear? What is the best way?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think Knowing how to overcome fear is so difficult.
When I feel fear, I think deeply and seriously how to overcome fear.
Sometimes It’s also that I told it my mom and dad.
Most I try to face with something of fear.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jenna!
You have totally impressed me today.
You did a good job.
I like how you wrote in your composition as well.
Try practicing different patterns of sentences.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think Knowing how to overcome fear is so difficult.
>> I think knowing how to overcome fear is so difficult.
When I feel fear, I think deeply and seriously how to overcome fear.
When I feel fear, I think deeply and seriously how to overcome fear.
>> Correct
Sometimes It’s also that I told it my mom and dad.
Sometimes It’s also that I told it my mom and dad.
>> Sometimes, I also talk about it with my mom and dad.
Most I try to face with something of fear.
Most I try to face with something of fear.
>> Most of the time, I just try to face my fears.
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