Do you know how to recognize stress in yourself? In other people?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I got stressed, my face has acne. and other people recongnize stiff look. So, they know to my feelings. My relieve stress method has taking a walk and eating delicious food. Most of people can\'t help stressed out. However, it is important how to relieve stress myself.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Clara ^^ Great job with your essay today. You improved in making sentences. Your sentences are longer and with clearer thought and you used capital letters. I hope you didn\'t get stressed about doing your homework. Good work and keep it up. ~ teacher Jane c\",)
When I got stressed, my face has acne.
>>> When I get stressed, I get acne on my face.
and other people recongnize stiff look.
>>> In other people, I notice they have a stiff look.
So, they know to my feelings.
>>> So they know how I\'m feeling.
My relieve stress method has taking a walk and eating delicious food.
>>> My stress relievers are to take a walk and eat delicious food.
Most of people can\'t help stressed out.
>>> Most people can\'t help stressing out.
However, it is important how to relieve stress myself.
>>> However, it is important to know how to relieve stress myself.
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