Do you know Jasper station in Canada?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I heard you are sick from another teacher today.
Take care of yourself.
Now I am watching TV about Across Canada by train.
One of the station in Canada is a Jasper station.
I was very happy to hear the name.
Are you Ok now?
Today I had a lesson from a female teacher. I heard her\'s name. But I forgot. She has a strong voice as like steel. Her\'s talking was very fast and a little echo. It was difficult to understand.
Your voice is very soft and good pronunciation. So I can understand your talking with easy.
For my English improvement, I feel a necessary to change something.
Have a good health!!
강사 첨삭
Good day [이름]! Thank you for your concern. I appreciate it very much. I\'m doing quite well. I feel better than yesterday. And, thank you for your compliment about my voice. I will see you in class later. Have a nice day! -T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
I heard you are sick from another teacher today.
>> CORRECT
OR
>> I heard from another teacher that you are sick.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
OR
>> One of the station in Canada is called Jasper station.
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
>> CORRECT
I heard her\'s name. But I forgot.
>> I heard her name but I forgot it.
She has a strong voice as like steel.
>> She has a strong voice. It\'s like steel.
Her\'s talking was very fast and a little echo.
>> She talks very fast and there was a little echo.
It was difficult to understand.
>> CORRECT
>> Your voice is very soft and you have a good pronunciation.
So I can understand your talking with easy.
>> That\'s why I can understand you easily.
>> For my English improvement, I feel that I need to change something.
Have a good health!!
>> CORRECT
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