Do you know k-pop? ;)

2024-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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I think it\'s one of Korea\'s culture that shows abroad. There are a lot of good songs and good dramas coming out, and I think this is a good thing for us, too. But sometimes, rather than showing Korean culture, I feel like I\'m continually copying a good example. It\'s kind of sad when I feel that way. Not everyone cares about Korean culture, but it seems like they are trying to become world-famous. But I usually watch pop songs from England and America, animations from Japan, and dramas from Korea, so I don\'t care much :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Da [이름], 

Your thoughts on K-pop and its impact on Korean culture are thought-provoking. It\'s interesting how you perceive it as both a showcase of Korean culture abroad and a potential imitation of Western norms. Your diverse taste in entertainment, including pop songs, animations, and dramas, reflects an open-minded approach to different cultures. Maybe next time, we can even sing along to some songs together! Thanks for sharing your perspective!  

~ Teacher Cathy 

 

I think it\'s one of Korea\'s culture that shows abroad. 

>>I think it\'s one of Korea\'s cultures that shows abroad. 

There are a lot of good songs and good dramas coming out, and I think this is a good thing for us, too. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>There are many good songs and dramas being released, and I believe this is beneficial for us as well. 

But sometimes, rather than showing Korean culture, I feel like I\'m continually copying a good example. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>But sometimes, instead of showcasing Korean culture, I feel like we\'re constantly imitating good examples. 

It\'s kind of sad when I feel that way. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>It\'s somewhat disheartening when I feel that way. 

Not everyone cares about Korean culture, but it seems like they are trying to become world-famous. 

>>CORRECT 

OR>>Not everyone values Korean culture, but it appears that there is an effort to attain global recognition. 

But I usually watch pop songs from England and America, animations from Japan, and dramas from Korea, so I don\'t care much :) 

>>But I usually listen to pop songs from England and America, watch animations from Japan, and dramas from Korea, so I don\'t care much :) 

 

 

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