Do you know of any interesting or unique restaurants in your town or city?
학생이 쓴 원문
My previous town has famous food street and traditional market.
There are a lot of famous restaurants in the food street.
Every weekend the street was full of people.
There was a long line in front of some restaurants.
I have never been to those restaurants although I lived close to them.
Instead of it, I often went to the traditional market.
There were some restaurants which only the locals knew.
Although I moved to the current town, somtimes I go to there with my family.
We eat delicious meals and buy side dishes.
My family really like the side dishes of the traditional market.
강사 첨삭
Hello Jennifer!
I\'m into traditional food!
I love different kinds of traditional food in my country and I love making them too :)
My previous town has famous food street and traditional market.
>>> There are famous food and traditional markets in my previous town.
There are a lot of famous restaurants in the food street.
>>> There are many famous restaurants on the food street.
Every weekend the street was full of people.
>>> CORRECT!
There was a long line in front of some restaurants.
>>> CORRECT!
I have never been to those restaurants although I lived close to them.
>>> CORRECT!
Instead of it, I often went to the traditional market.
>>> Instead, I often went to traditional markets.
There were some restaurants which only the locals knew.
>>> There were restaurants that only locals knew.
Although I moved to the current town, somtimes I go to there with my family.
>>> Although I moved to the current town, sometimes I go to there with my family.
We eat delicious meals and buy side dishes.
>>> CORRECT!
My family really like the side dishes of the traditional market.
>>> CORRECT!
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