Do you know of any interesting ways to explore your town or city?
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I prefer to search the information about the city before I visit there. Especially, I usually find some places where I can walk and see sceneries. Because I enjoy them, I often sightsee and walk through a walkway and a mural village when I trip. Although there are many advantages of busy travel, I like the time that I can relax myself by sightseeing the sceneries. If there is a person who likes taking a rest during travel, I recommend to finding places to walk before the trip.
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Hi [이름]!
Most my friends like taking a walk when we travel.
Sad to say I\'m not, but I have to when I\'m with them :)
I prefer to search the information about the city before I visit there.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: I prefer to search for information about the city before visiting there.
Especially, I usually find some places where I can walk and see sceneries.
>>> CORRECT!
OR: In particular, I usually look for places where I can walk or see the scenery.
Because I enjoy them, I often sightsee and walk through a walkway and a mural village when I trip.
>>> Because I enjoy them, I often go sightseeing and walk through trails and mural villages when I travel.
Although there are many advantages of busy travel, I like the time that I can relax myself by sightseeing the sceneries.
>>> There are many advantages of a busy trip, but it\'s good to have time to relax while looking at the scenery.
If there is a person who likes taking a rest during travel, I recommend to finding places to walk before the trip.
>>> If there is a person who likes taking a rest during travel, I recommend finding a place to walk before the trip.
OR: If you like to rest while traveling, I recommend you to find a place to walk before traveling.
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