Do you know the king of the United Kingdom?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I know. The king of the United Kingdom is [이름]rles |||, he is 75 years old.
Unfortunately he has a cancer now.
And he is a son of Elizabeth 2.
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Do you know the king of the United Kingdom?
Yes, I know.
>> OR: Sure, I do.
The king of the United Kingdom is [이름]rles |||, he is 75 years old.
>> The king of the United Kingdom is [이름]rles III and he is 75 years old.
Unfortunately he has a cancer now.
>> Unfortunately, he has cancer now.
And he is a son of Elizabeth 2.
>> And he is a son of Elizabeth II.
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