Do you like adventure?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t prefer adventure because I don\'t want change in my life.
if I’m going to have a adventure, I will need a great courage to practice.
If I do, I want to have a big adventure with someone who enjoys it.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
These are good sentence patterns.
They are very clear and direct to the point.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I don\'t prefer adventure because I don\'t want change in my life.
>> Correct
if I’m going to have a adventure, I will need a great courage to practice.
if I’m going to have a adventure, I will need a great courage to practice.
>> If I’m going to have an adventure, I will need great courage to practice.
If I do, I want to have a big adventure with someone who enjoys it.
If I do, I want to have a big adventure with someone who enjoys it.
>> Correct
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