Do you like adventure? Who would you like to have a big adventure with?
학생이 쓴 원문
Adventure means that various events which we cannot expect occur. I think that adventure makes most people excited including me. Personally, I like adventure since it gives me opportunities to experience what I have never done. For example, going on a trip to country I've never been can be adventure to me.
If I were given to chance to trip to other country, I would travel with my boyfriend. There are some reasons for this. First, we have similar personality. Although our personality is not the same exactly, nevertheless, we have similar tendency; thus, I can say that we will get along with when we go trip together. Second, I can travel without anxiety. During the trip, it is possible that I'm in dangerous situations, but, if I go on a trip with my boyfriend, I do not need to worry about it since he will always protect me.
For those two reasons, I want to experience exciting adventure with my boyfriend. I strongly believe that it will be interesting.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]!
I am excited with your plan to have an adventure with your boyfriend. kkk When that happens, make sure to share your story with me. Anyway, have fun and enjoy your daily adventures as well.
~Kelly^^
Adventure means that various events which we cannot expect occur.
>> Adventure means various events which we don\'t expect to occur.
I think that adventure makes most people excited including me.
>> Correct.
Personally, I like adventure since it gives me opportunities to experience what I have never done.
>> Correct.
For example, going on a trip to country I\'ve never been can be adventure to me.
>> For example, going on a trip to a country I\'ve never been can be an adventure to me.If I were given to chance to trip to other country, I would travel with my boyfriend.
>> If I were given a to chance to go on a trip to another country, I would travel with my boyfriend.
There are some reasons for this.
>> Correct.
First, we have similar personality.
>> Firstly, we have a similar personality.
>> Firstly, we have similar personalities.
Although our personality is not the same exactly, nevertheless, we have similar tendency; thus, I can say that we will get along with when we go trip together.
>> Although our personality is not the same exactly, nevertheless, we have similaraties; thus, I can say that we will get along well when we go on a trip together.
Second, I can travel without anxiety.
>> Secondly, I can travel without anxiety.
During the trip, it is possible that I\'m in dangerous situations, but, if I go on a trip with my boyfriend, I do not need to worry about it since he will always protect me.
>> During a trip, it is possible to encounter dangerous situations, but, if I go on a trip with my boyfriend, I do not need to worry about it since he will always protect me.For those two reasons, I want to experience exciting adventure with my boyfriend.
>> For those two reasons, I want to experience exciting an adventure with my boyfriend.
I strongly believe that it will be interesting.
>> Correct.
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