Do you like asking favors from others?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I like it. I feel gratitude and happiness when I help others. The reason why I feel gratitude is the fact that I help somebody means I have ability or resourses to do that job. In short, it is thankful thing that I can help others because it indicates my relatively good environments or conditions. Even though pursuing my happiness through comparing with other\'s status is not right, it\'s the fact.
Also, most of favors from others are not harmful to me. Nobody makes favors to others with demaging the opponents . People have minimal conscience, so they will restrain their favor themselves. These proper leveled favors just take some efforts. If I can make others happy and convenient by only small efforts, why I don not help them?
Askig favors from others is profitable business since you can rise your reputation through it. You can also get unspoken agreements to ask the favor to the person through your kindness.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. You\'re right, it\'s always a good feeling to be able to help others, as long as it is not too much burden for you.
- T. Beth
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Yes, I like it. >>> correct
I feel gratitude and happiness when I help others.
>>> correct
The reason why I feel gratitude is the fact that I help somebody means I have ability or resourses to do that job.
>>> The reason why I feel gratitude is the fact that I help somebody means I have the ability or resources to do that job.
In short, it is thankful thing that I can help others because it indicates my relatively good environments or conditions.
>>> In short, it is something to be thankful for that I can help others because it indicates my relatively good environments or conditions.
Even though pursuing my happiness through comparing with other\'s status is not right, it\'s the fact.
>>> correct
Also, most of favors from others are not harmful to me.
Also, most of favors from others are not harmful to me.
>>> correct
Nobody makes favors to others with demaging the opponents .
>>> Nobody makes favors for others with the intention of damaging the opponent.
People have minimal conscience, so they will restrain their favor themselves.
>>> correct
These proper leveled favors just take some efforts.
>>> correct
If I can make others happy and convenient by only small efforts, why I don not help them?
>>> If I can make others happy and convenient by only small efforts, why not help them?
Askig favors from others is profitable business since you can rise your reputation through it.
>>> Being asked favors by others is a profitable business since you can raise your reputation through it.
You can also get unspoken agreements to ask the favor to the person through your kindness.
>>> correct
>>> OR: You can also get unspoken agreements to ask the favor in return through your kindness.
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