Do you like being a kid or do you want to be an adult?(ANSWER)

I like being a kid. Because if I'm an adult, I have to work at busness and I must live a busy life. And if I'm a kid, I can play and I can have time with my family. Also, I can sleep all the day. :) I want to live as a kid forever!(like Peter Pan.) -END-

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

Do you like being a kid or do you want to be an adult?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

I like being a kid.
Because if I\'m an adult, I have to work at busness and I must live a busy life.
And if I\'m a kid, I can play and I can have time with my family.
Also, I can sleep all the day. :)
I want to live as a kid forever!(like Peter Pan.)

 

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CORRECTIONS:

 

I like being a kid.
Because if I\'m an adult, I have to work for business and I must live a busy life.
And if I\'m a kid, I can play and I can have time with my family.
Also, I can sleep all the day. :)
I want to live as a kid forever! (like Peter Pan.) 

 

 

** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. Well done! You only have a few mistakes. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------