Do you like being at home alone? Why or why not?
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Basically, I like being at home alone. So I can rest anytime without interference,
do housework , do my leisure and get energy.
Sometimes,I need to get along with my friends and do hobbies also too.
As a office worker,I share my time depending on my health condition.
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Basically, I like being at home alone.
>> Correct
So I can rest anytime without interference,
>> It\'s so that I can rest without any interference.
do housework , do my leisure and get energy.
do housework , do my leisure and get energy.
>> I do housework, enjoy my leisure time and get back my energy.
Sometimes,I need to get along with my friends and do hobbies also too.
Sometimes,I need to get along with my friends and do hobbies also too.
>> Sometimes, I need to spend time with with my friends and spend time on my hobbies, too.
As a office worker,I share my time depending on my health condition.
As a office worker,I share my time depending on my health condition.
>> As an office worker, I share my time depending on my health condition.
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