Do you like being the age at which you now are?
학생이 쓴 원문
Probably I am not satisfied with my age. But I don\'t hate my age.
Maybe some people tell me that you are in heyday. Although I am in my youth, because of that, I am tired of my life.
I feel being unstable, not ready and nervous often. And in everyday, I am afraid of my employment in the near future. but I know it\'s very natural.
It\'s a time when I have to think hard about my career path and vision of my life. But it\'s also previlege about thinking various challenges with less loss than others. Without anxiety about future, I love my age and the present.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] Yun~
It is quite normal to worry about the future, as you mentioned, and it is a privilege to do so while you are young since it shows that you are conscious of the need to make better preparations for the future. I admire those who are thinking about their futures at an early age because I was not able to do so myself. It is unfortunate that I simply enjoyed my youth without considering the future. However, one\'s drive determines how he manages and balances his life.
Chammy
Probably I am not satisfied with my age. But I don\'t hate my age.
>>Correct
OR
>> I am dissatisfied with my age but I don\'t hate it either.
Maybe some people tell me that you are in heyday.
>> Maybe some people will tell me that I am in my heyday.
Although I am in my youth, because of that, I am tired of my life.
OR
>> Despite being in my youth, I am already tired of my existence.
I feel being unstable, not ready and nervous often. And in everyday, I am afraid of my employment in the near future. but I know it\'s very natural.
>> I feel unstable, not ready, and nervous often. And in every day, I am afraid of my employment in the near future, but I know it\'s very natural.
Or
>> I often feel unstable, unprepared, and nervous. I also worry every day about my career in the future, even though I know it\'s perfectly normal.
It\'s a time when I have to think hard about my career path and vision of my life.
OR
>> Now is the time for me to reflect on my life goals and career path.
But it\'s also previlege about thinking various challenges with less loss than others.
>> But it\'s also a privilege to think of various challenges with less loss than others.
Without anxiety about future, I love my age and the present.
>> Without anxiety about the future, I would love my age and the present.
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