Do you like black?

2021-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I don\'t really like black color, dark nights, and place where there is no light. Wearing black color is when I go to the house of mourning. However I sometimes wear black shoes.

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Thank you for the effort today.

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~~ Teacher Sharon

I don\'t really like black color, dark nights, and place where there is no light.

>> I don\'t really like black color, dark nights, and places where there are no light.
Wearing black color is when I go to the house of mourning.

>> I only wear black when I attend a funeral.
However I sometimes wear black shoes.

>> However, I sometimes wear black shoes.

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