Do you like choosing presents for people or is it something you find difficult and time-consuming?

2015-05-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

I do have a hard time choosing presents for people and I don’t like it. I always find it difficult to choose a present because I don’t have confidence whether a person who is given will like it or not. Moreover, thinking over what to buy for him/her is tiring and time consuming. It’s a headache. However, gifts occupy an important place in our social life. They build our relations with other people. We exchange gifts with other people on different festivals, events etc. Gifts speak our love for one other. Real gifts are the expression of our inner goodness and sincerity. Gifts are token of live, trust and good will. They play an important part in making us love one another. Our gifts must represent two things. First, they must fulfill the needs of our friends and relatives. Second, they must be creation of our selves. They must be the part of our own nature. Different creative gifts become a part of the memory of the person who receives.

강사 첨삭

Hello again Sir [이름]!

Happy Monday. ^^

Let us welcome this week with a big smile.

How do you feel today?

I feel a bit sleepy because I didn\'t have enough sleep last night.

I wasn\'t able to do my tasks because I went home late. hihihihi.

I hope that you will have a fantastic week ahead of you.

I totally agree with your ideas. 

 Gifts are really important In our lives.

We should always remember that  when giving presents, it is not the cost that matters but the thought.
I am looking forward to see you in class.

Teacher Nina


I do have a hard time choosing presents for people and I don’t like it.

>> correct

I always find it difficult to choose a present because I don’t have confidence whether a person who is given will like it or not.

>> I always find it difficult to choose a present because I\'m not confident whether the person who is given will like it or not.

>> OR: I always have difficult in choosing the present because I\'m not that confident whether the person will like it or not.

Moreover, thinking over what to buy for him/her is tiring and time consuming.

>> correct

It’s a headache.

>> correct

>> OR: It is a headache for me.

However, gifts occupy an important place in our social life.

>> correct

They build our relations with other people.

>> correct

We exchange gifts with other people on different festivals, events etc.

>> correct

Gifts speak our love for one other.

>> correct

Real gifts are the expression of our inner goodness and sincerity.

>> correct

Gifts are token of live, trust and good will. 

>> correct

They play an important part in making us love one another.

>> correct

Our gifts must represent two things.

>> correct

First, they must fulfill the needs of our friends and relatives.

>> correct

Second, they must be creation of our selves.

>> Did you mean: Second, they must be a creation of ourselves.
>> OR: Second, we must made it ourselves.

They must be the part of our own nature.

>> correct

Different creative gifts become a part of the memory of the person who receives.

>> correct

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·