Do you like choosing presents for people or is it something you find difficult and time-consuming?
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Hello again Sir [이름]!
Happy Monday. ^^
Let us welcome this week with a big smile.
How do you feel today?
I feel a bit sleepy because I didn\'t have enough sleep last night.
I wasn\'t able to do my tasks because I went home late. hihihihi.
I hope that you will have a fantastic week ahead of you.
I totally agree with your ideas.
Gifts are really important In our lives.
We should always remember that when giving presents, it is not the cost that matters but the thought.
I am looking forward to see you in class.
Teacher Nina
I do have a hard time choosing presents for people and I don’t like it.
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I always find it difficult to choose a present because I don’t have confidence whether a person who is given will like it or not.
>> I always find it difficult to choose a present because I\'m not confident whether the person who is given will like it or not.
>> OR: I always have difficult in choosing the present because I\'m not that confident whether the person will like it or not.
Moreover, thinking over what to buy for him/her is tiring and time consuming.
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It’s a headache.
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>> OR: It is a headache for me.
However, gifts occupy an important place in our social life.
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They build our relations with other people.
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We exchange gifts with other people on different festivals, events etc.
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Gifts speak our love for one other.
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Real gifts are the expression of our inner goodness and sincerity.
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Gifts are token of live, trust and good will.
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They play an important part in making us love one another.
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Our gifts must represent two things.
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First, they must fulfill the needs of our friends and relatives.
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Second, they must be creation of our selves.
>> Did you mean: Second, they must be a creation of ourselves.
>> OR: Second, we must made it ourselves.
They must be the part of our own nature.
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Different creative gifts become a part of the memory of the person who receives.
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