Do you like cities or the countryside? Which is better and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to live in the city.
Because, I have lived whole life in the city.
City is my home.
Of course, it is funny to go to the outside like a countryside.
However, it is not a home so it is unfamiliar for me.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]!^^
Thank you for doing your homework and for putting your thoughts into writing. Enjoy city life!^^
Goodnight!
Always,
Kelly^^
I like to live in the city.>> Correct
OR:
>> I prefer living in the city.
Because, I have lived whole life in the city.
>> Because I have lived my whole life in the city.
City is my home.
City is my home.
>> The city is my home.
Of course, it is funny to go to the outside like a countryside.
Of course, it is funny to go to the outside like a countryside.
>> Of course, it is fun to go outside like in the countryside.
However, it is not a home so it is unfamiliar for me.
However, it is not a home so it is unfamiliar for me.
>> However, it is not a home so it is unfamiliar to me.
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