Do you like cooking?

2020-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Dear [Name], I don\'t like cooking. But if I stay along, I cook something to eat. For example Korean Ramen. Two years ago I lost my job. So I stayed at home. My wife worked in Hospital. When she came back home, I had to cook somrthing for her. I cooked fried egg and sausage and steamed rice. I like eating more than cooking.

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Hi [이름]. It was a very good composition. It made me smile. 

Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name],


I don\'t like cooking. 
>> CORRECT

But if I stay along, I cook something to eat. 
>> But, if I\'m alone, I cook something to eat.

For example Korean Ramen.
>> CORRECT

Two years ago I lost my job. So I stayed at home. 
>> Two years ago, I lost my job so I had to stay at home.

My wife worked in Hospital. 
>> My wife worked in the hospital.

When she came back home, I had to cook somrthing for her. 
>> Before she came back home from work, I had to cook something for her.

I cooked fried egg and sausage and steamed rice.
>> I cooked fried egg, sausage, and steamed rice.

I like eating more than cooking
>> CORRECT

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