Do you like drawing as a hobby? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes I do. I like drawing as a hobby.
When I draw I feel happy.
Specifically I feel happy when I complete a difficult picture.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Yale!
Here\'s your corrected homework from yesterday. Please check out the corrected and alternative sentences below.
See you tomorrow!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Do you like drawing as a hobby? Explain your answer.
Yes I do. I like drawing as a hobby.
>> or: Sure, I enjoy drawing as a hobby.
When I draw I feel happy.
>> or: I feel happy when I draw.
Specifically I feel happy when I complete a difficult picture.
>> To be specific, I feel happy when I complete a difficult picture.
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