Do you like drink?"
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Hi, RJ
Yesterday, I ask that "Do you like drink?"
you said that
"
My friend do.
nowaday, I am getting a little old.
"
then, I can't explain my thinking.
so, I wrote that I hope to say below.
[Anybody don't cheat their age. It is time to eat for self-body.]
and also, You ask me that "What is most important thing taught for you?"
I did hoped to say that.
What you think becomes reality,
It is just only your deepest wish.
It's not all of your wishes.
Have a One wish. and keep going.
Deepest wish will be reality.
Have a good day RJ~!
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Hello [이름],
Thanks for your message.
Yes, nowadays I don뭪 really like drinking, but I like the drinking environment.
People are very friendly and active when they are drunk.
So I think its fun.
And about your opinion, I really agree with you.
Whatever we think becomes reality.
Do you know Napoleon Hill? He is a famous writer who taught this.
Anyway, talk to you again tomorrow. Take care!
T. RJ
Here are your corrections:
Hi, RJYesterday, I ask that "Do you like drink?"
>> Yesterday, I asked "Do you like to drink?"you said that"My friend do. nowaday, I am getting a little old.">> You said that "My friends do. Nowadays, I am getting a little old."then, I can't explain my thinking.
>> Then, I couldn't explain my thinking.so, I wrote that I hope to say below.
>> So, I wrote what I hoped to say below.[Anybody don't cheat their age. It is time to eat for self-body.]
>>???and also, You ask me that "What is most important thing taught for you?">> And also, you ask me that "What is the most important thing taught to you?"
I did hoped to say that.>> I did hope to say this.What you think becomes reality,
>>CORRECT It is just only your deepest wish.
>>CORRECTIt's not all of your wishes.
>>CORRECTHave a One wish. and keep going.
>>Have one wish, and keep going.Deepest wish will be reality.>>Your deepest wish will become reality.Have a good day RJ~!
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