Do you like drink?"

2010-02-24 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

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Hi, RJ Yesterday, I ask that "Do you like drink?" you said that " My friend do. nowaday, I am getting a little old. " then, I can't explain my thinking. so, I wrote that I hope to say below. [Anybody don't cheat their age. It is time to eat for self-body.] and also, You ask me that "What is most important thing taught for you?" I did hoped to say that. What you think becomes reality, It is just only your deepest wish. It's not all of your wishes. Have a One wish. and keep going. Deepest wish will be reality. Have a good day RJ~!

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Top of Form Hello [이름], Thanks for your message. Yes, nowadays I don뭪 really like drinking, but I like the drinking environment. People are very friendly and active when they are drunk. So I think its fun. And about your opinion, I really agree with you. Whatever we think becomes reality. Do you know Napoleon Hill? He is a famous writer who taught this. Anyway, talk to you again tomorrow. Take care! T. RJ Here are your corrections: Hi, RJYesterday, I ask that "Do you like drink?" >> Yesterday, I asked "Do you like to drink?"you said that"My friend do. nowaday, I am getting a little old.">> You said that "My friends do. Nowadays, I am getting a little old."then, I can't explain my thinking. >> Then, I couldn't explain my thinking.so, I wrote that I hope to say below. >> So, I wrote what I hoped to say below.[Anybody don't cheat their age. It is time to eat for self-body.] >>???and also, You ask me that "What is most important thing taught for you?">> And also, you ask me that "What is the most important thing taught to you?" I did hoped to say that.>> I did hope to say this.What you think becomes reality, >>CORRECT It is just only your deepest wish. >>CORRECTIt's not all of your wishes. >>CORRECTHave a One wish. and keep going. >>Have one wish, and keep going.Deepest wish will be reality.>>Your deepest wish will become reality.Have a good day RJ~! Bottom of Form  

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