Do you like eating fruits and vegetables?

2021-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I like three fruits: apples, peaches, and Halabongs. I\'ve eaten a apple every morning for my health. In the case peach and halabong, I eat a lot of them especially during the fruit season. I\'m eating vegetables for my health but I don\'t like those that much. There is no food that I can not stand because I think eating less is helpful to my health.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Ha! 
I\'m glad you\'re putting in the work again.
Delayed gratification is the best kind of happiness.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like three fruits: apples, peaches, and Halabongs.
>> I like three kinds of fruits: apples, peaches, and Halabong oranges.
I\'ve eaten a apple every morning for my health.
>> I eat apples every morning for my health.
In the case peach and halabong, I eat a lot of them especially during the fruit season.
>> In the case of peaches and Halabong oranges, I eat a lot of them especially when they are in season.
I\'m eating vegetables for my health but I don\'t like those that much.
>> Correct
There is no food that I can not stand because I think eating less is helpful to my health.
>> Correct

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