Do you like family reunions? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like family reunions. Because my cousins and grandmother live separated each other with my family. When families got back again, I felt comfortable and my heart warm.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Jenna. I always appreciate your honesty every time you write your composition. I agree with you because for me, family is love. We will talk more about family reunion in class. I will see you then. Take care! ~ T. Lyn
I like family reunions.
>>Correct.
Because my cousins and grandmother live separated each other with my family.
>>This is because my cousin and grandmother live away from the family.
When families got back again, I felt comfortable and my heart warm.
>>When my family returns and gets together, I feel comfortable and warm.
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