Do you like food from other countries?

2020-08-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Dear [Name], I like Turkey food named Kebab. when I visited Rome in Itary, I ate it with my family. I like beef stake too. I had it many time in Korea. but I remember very delicious food, when I ate it in Sydney. When I visited the Sebu, I ate many kind of seafoods. I could not forget the fresh feeling. My wife like to eat a brackfast in the morning in Hotel. She think, it is very noble food. I have been to many others countries during 20 years, and I enjoyed a lot of foods. but I like Korean food. Did you have the Korean food? We have many kind of foods as named Hansik. Theses days, many forenigner enjoy the Korean food. A few years ago, I didn\'t know a superior of ours. but now, I have a proud of the Korean food through Youtube channel. if you search the Korean food in Youtube, you can find a lot of videos about them.

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Good day [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Keep up the good work.

Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name],

I like Turkey food named Kebab. 
>> I like food from Turkey named Kebab.

when I visited Rome in Itary, I ate it with my family.
>> When I visited Rome in Italy, I ate it with my family.

I like beef stake too. 
>> I like beef steak too.

I had it many time in Korea. 
>> I had it many times in Korea.

but I remember very delicious food, when I ate it in Sydney.
>> But I remember eating a delicious food from Sydney.

When I visited the Sebu, I ate many kind of seafoods. 
>> When I visited Cebu, I ate many kinds of sea food.

I could not forget the fresh feeling.
>> CORRECT

My wife like to eat a brackfast in the morning in Hotel. 
>> My wife likes to eat breakfast in a hotel in the morning.

She think, it is very noble food.
>> She thinks it\'s a noble food.

I have been to many others countries during 20 years, and I enjoyed a lot of foods. 
>> I have been to many countries for 20 years and I enjoyed a lot of food.

but I like Korean food.
>> But I still like Korean food.

Did you have the Korean food? 
>> Do you have Korean foods? 

We have many kind of foods as named Hansik.
>> We have many kinds of food like \'Hansik\'.

Theses days, many forenigner enjoy the Korean food.
>> These days, many foreigners enjoy Korean food.

A few years ago, I didn\'t know a superior of ours. but now, I have a proud of the Korean food through Youtube channel.
>> A few years ago, I didn\'t know that our food are superior, but now I\'m proud of the Korean food because of YouTube.

if you search the Korean food in Youtube, you can find a lot of videos about them.
>> If you search Korean food in YouTube, you will find a lot of videos about them.

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