Do you like food from other countries?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I like Turkey food named Kebab. when I visited Rome in Itary, I ate it with my family.
I like beef stake too. I had it many time in Korea. but I remember very delicious food, when I ate it in Sydney.
When I visited the Sebu, I ate many kind of seafoods. I could not forget the fresh feeling.
My wife like to eat a brackfast in the morning in Hotel. She think, it is very noble food.
I have been to many others countries during 20 years, and I enjoyed a lot of foods. but I like Korean food.
Did you have the Korean food? We have many kind of foods as named Hansik.
Theses days, many forenigner enjoy the Korean food.
A few years ago, I didn\'t know a superior of ours. but now, I have a proud of the Korean food through Youtube channel.
if you search the Korean food in Youtube, you can find a lot of videos about them.
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Good day [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Keep up the good work.
Here are your corrections:
I like Turkey food named Kebab.
>> I like food from Turkey named Kebab.
when I visited Rome in Itary, I ate it with my family.
>> When I visited Rome in Italy, I ate it with my family.
>> I like beef steak too.
I had it many time in Korea.
>> I had it many times in Korea.
but I remember very delicious food, when I ate it in Sydney.
>> But I remember eating a delicious food from Sydney.
When I visited the Sebu, I ate many kind of seafoods.
>> When I visited Cebu, I ate many kinds of sea food.
I could not forget the fresh feeling.
>> CORRECT
>> My wife likes to eat breakfast in a hotel in the morning.
She think, it is very noble food.
>> She thinks it\'s a noble food.
I have been to many others countries during 20 years, and I enjoyed a lot of foods.
>> I have been to many countries for 20 years and I enjoyed a lot of food.
but I like Korean food.
>> But I still like Korean food.
Did you have the Korean food?
>> Do you have Korean foods?
We have many kind of foods as named Hansik.
>> We have many kinds of food like \'Hansik\'.
>> These days, many foreigners enjoy Korean food.
>> A few years ago, I didn\'t know that our food are superior, but now I\'m proud of the Korean food because of YouTube.
>> If you search Korean food in YouTube, you will find a lot of videos about them.
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