Do you like going to beach?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I like going to beach .
First , I lke swimming at the beach.
second reason is I can play sand at the beach.
For these reasons, I like going to beach.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
First , I lke swimming at the beach.
second reason is I can play sand at the beach.
For these reasons, I like going to beach.
Yes, I like going to beach .
>>CORRECT
First , I lke swimming at the beach.
>>First , I like swimming at the beach.
second reason is I can play sand at the beach.
>>Second reason is, I can play sand at the beach. (CAPITAL LETTER - S)
OR
>>The second reason is I can play in the sand at the beach.
For these reasons, I like going to beach.
>>CORRECT
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